Have I ever told you?
I rush the days to pass by
To live in those together-moments
As you enthrall my dreams
I summon the moon to guard the nights
I rush the days to pass by
As I hone the twinkle in my eyes
I invite the stars to shine on
I summon the moon to guard the nights
As you sprout like a smile on my lips
To hold the vim and vigor of it
I invite the stars to shine on
As we clasp hands to lock our love
I embrace my life all over
To hold the vim and vigor of it
You’re my love, longing, life and a lot more
Have I ever told you?
I embrace my life all over
To live in those together-moments
Terzanelle (from Wikipedia): A Terzanelle is a poetic form with nineteen lines total, with five triplets and a concluding quatrain. The middle line of each triplet stanza is repeated as the third line of the following stanza, and the first and third lines of the initial stanza are the second and final lines of the concluding quatrain; thus, seven of the lines are repeated in the poem.
నీ పద్యం చాలా బాగుంది . నా దగ్గర మాటలు సరి పొవట్లేదు నీ కవి హృదయాన్ని అభినందిచాటానికి. ????????????????????????????
Thank You, Vikram, for your nice words about my Terzanelle.
Wonderful!!
Summoning moon and stars ..wow!!
Yes! Love does give that power.
So beautiful!
Thank You, Sri.
హనుమాన్ అనే నేను….. అంతఃకరణ శుద్దితో చెపుతున్నా లలిత అనే మా అక్క ఏమి వ్రాసిన అద్బుతం….
నీ అభిమానానికి బోల్డన్ని థాంక్స్, తమ్ముడూ!
One of the best terzanelle.????????
Thank You, Jyothi!
Very cute poem
Thank You, Nityaa V!