The leaves rustled as the moon shone upon the path and all of a sudden, the trees shook with rage, fruit squealed and fell, the rocks beneath started rumbling. Thunder struck my garden and I immediately ran into my villa to my bedroom and, taking a long stride across the carpet I set out to close the window just before I saw with my blurred eyes a boy-he looked strong, muscular, young, tall(about six feet) with shabby hair; his eyes were emerald green-he looked at me with a patient yet a hard look. Terrified by the unanticipated appearance I shivered and fell down, just before he caught me and explained about, who he is and why did he need my help. My help? I was astonished by the fact that a small, frail, juvenile seventeen-year-old girl can help this powerful guy!
He pacified me and introduced himself. He said, “My name is Theo. I came here for your help, for finding a mystery door somewhere in your home so as to fulfill my duties for my sacred family. I would have to place a sacred gem over there and travel back to an unexquisited place. Therefore, I need your help Clara. Please don’t be frightened and be brave, assist me.” I froze and replied under my fast breath,” How-do-you-know-MY-name?” He chuckled and told,” We know everyone in this world and please do not ask me how, as, it’s an untold story which I can’t reveal.” A shiver ran over my spine; I saw pure confidence and faith in his eyes.
After hearing his purpose of arrival I tried to recall my father’s words about the veiled, mysterious doors of our ancient piece; he once said,” This home is a special antique place with unrevealed secrets that can be found only through a hidden code in our garden….I have tried many times to decipher but lost hope.” Recollecting this memory, I guide Theo to the garden.
While I search through the loopholes of this place he stood still and whispered a type of mantra and suddenly certain things started glowing around the garden-my mom’s antique vase, the rocking chair, bench and my favourite pot-were bright gold. They were all deciphered and were pointing towards a direction-my mom’s relic. Theo and I proceed towards the vase, it was covered with a code and there was a trapdoor. We clicked on a button and instantly we fell and landed on something hard and he said,” Thanks a ton for your help and this is where we part, sorry, goodbye!” With a quick flash of bright light which flickered on my face, I saw him placing a jewel and then he-disappeared.
I woke up screaming and as if I was teleported from the hidden place, I figured out that I was sitting on my comfy bed but I was confident that this account was not a dream as those golden things vanished and the piece of ruby(jewel) was stuck to my bracelet with a tiny inscription calligraphed-
‘Soon’
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It’s beyond awesome and you proved that even short stories can teleport you to a universe of imagination not only novels. I hope you could also write a second part on it. Good luck.
I enjoyed the read, especially the ending.
This short story is extremely enthralling as it really captivates the reader. Loved every bit of it!!! Great job Manaswini!
This short story is extremely enthralling as it really captivates the reader and leaves them wanting more. Loved every bit of it!!!
i love the idea behind the story. it was truly amazing!
Great writing! I knew you always had a way with words. Keep doing your best. Hoping for more stories to come.
I loved the plot! It grabs your attention immediately, and keeps you interested until the end!! Just awesome 🙂
Amazing!